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Unlock Conditions:
- Only available on the Deafening Quiet / Greatest Hits release.
- Complete the game once to unlock Rainbow Dash's sub-scenario "Twice as Bright".
- Completing the sub-scenario changes the conditions for Rainbow Dash's final appearance and adds a dialogue option.
- Don't view all the memories.
- Don't encounter Pinkie Pie.
- Find the picture of Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash in the abandoned mansion.
- Choose "I'm hurt..." instead of "I should encourage her..." when encountering Rainbow Dash.

(I could also see the mechanics for Ending 4+ being reworked a bit with the title "No, It was Just a Mistake".)

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I dreamt up this alternate ending (literally) the night I finished reading Silent Ponyville 2's main story. I think Applejack was the third pony instead of Rainbow Dash though.

I wrote this at that time, but I didn't want to post this during the Christmas season, and I sort of forgot about it after that.

There's a lot going on here between the lines that I leave to the reader's imagination, but I can explain if anyone is overly confused.

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Pictured Memories scene originally written by:
:iconace2401: ~Ace2401

Parting in Fire scene lightly modified as written in Silent Ponyville 2, original story by:
:iconjake-heritagu: *jake-heritagu
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Thanks for the comments. I'll consider writing something longer, but it may be a bit as I have another (non-pony related) project taking up my creative energy at the moment.